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#10 - Teresa Line Art Paint
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by pwni


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Dianote Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Great job!
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aquaeevee Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
much as i dislike pointing things like this out, i need to ask where the second lightsourse is coming from, because it s not coming from the borrowed background, that would put the light highlights on her back, not in front, which would give her a moon halo effect. the background alo gives a rather sharp contrast in styles though it is quite the pretty picture combined. otherwise it is wonderfully shaded and quite well colored. you did a good job.

my vote? 

an overall 4/5 cookies
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thiagorafael Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh, ty for feedback ^^
well, the main idea was front light
but im change the background and dont remake the lights
at momment, light and shadows is my problem, i need to try so hard
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aquaeevee Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
if your going to change out the background, then go for something that has the lightsource coming from the same place. looked to me to be coming from the top middle. may also want to consider shifting the whole figure ever so slightly to the left or right in the future, give it a little... whats the word... composition? yeah thats it. composition. otherwise it looks fantastic. it would look quite good even without a background as well.
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CptKay Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This manga needs more love!  
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thiagorafael Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is the best in my opinnion
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
nice look here.
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thiagorafael Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ty bro
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
welcome
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